Ineffective/Effective Critique

Ralston's critique of Ryan's "We Are Not Created Equal in Every Way" has an introduction that relays the significance of the issue in an entertaining way. His summary succinctly touches base on Ryan's important points. Ralston even manages to define just the right terms. The only thing he might be lacking in is the presentation of information in a way that it appears perfectly factual and not assumed. A distinction might be in order.